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Post by 1pokemon1 on Jun 27, 2007 23:21:35 GMT
oh never mind
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Post by iAaron on Jun 27, 2007 23:23:12 GMT
Alright, but seriously, I was wondering why you thought so. I really am curious, in a good sort of way. You sparked my curiosity, shall we say.
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Post by 1pokemon1 on Jun 29, 2007 0:21:35 GMT
 No, your map is great, Jin! This is Umbruhstar City, located in Yusoh. It's Gym Leaders, Mørk and Letta, are twins. Mørk is a dark, withdrawn brother of Letta who is a very gothic-type boy. Letta is a light, friendly, chattery twin girl who is very breezy and summery. They both have matching red clothes. The town is overally normal, with two Aviator Brothers, Jack and John, who also have a Staravia Fan Club. There is a Pokemon Adoption Center there, but you have to pay 50 poke to get a adoption Pokemon, to pay for the vaccines. You must also be approved by bobdat. How'd ya like it? Jin and Maria, how'd ya like it? There are many flaws in your edit of Vermillion City Here is my map since yall want to see it  No stealing I made a new map  |
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Post by Harry Dark on Jul 1, 2007 12:51:18 GMT
Both of them would be better with
1. If i could actually see it
2. If it had labels
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Post by 1pokemon1 on Jul 1, 2007 15:52:24 GMT
this is a premap
premaps don't have labels
I can see, so can they
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Post by Harry Dark on Jul 1, 2007 16:45:40 GMT
Doesnt that just limit people?
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Post by 1pokemon1 on Jul 1, 2007 18:55:23 GMT
okay can you see it now
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Post by iAaron on Jul 1, 2007 23:02:25 GMT
I can't, but I used too. And btw, I know it has a flaws, because it's copy and paste, but how do you like the layout?
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Post by 1pokemon1 on Jul 2, 2007 2:49:06 GMT
pretty good
I'll try to fix your map.
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Post by iAaron on Jul 2, 2007 15:34:21 GMT
You don't need to, but if you want to kill time that's fine by me. I love editing stuff, too. Anyways, I just thought, it might be easier to draw a map after we draw the cities. That way, we don't have to conform to the map, but the map can connect through our cities. That way, the city will look better. Anyways, I'm making Pyro Town, a Fire-Gym town with a Sydney-like Gym Leader named Brannford. (Brann means fire in Norwegian. I looked it up in the Norwegian-English Dictionary. It's amazing how much stuff my family has... we're not even Norwegian!) So anyways, yeah... I'm planning for it to be an all land city... so yeah...
So far here is what I came up with for Umbruhstar City:
Umbruhstar City is originated from the English word 'star,' referring to light, and Umbra, which means 'shadow' in Latin, referring to darkness. Such is the case for their two gym leaders. Originally, Umbruhstar City was owned by two friends, Dusk Eron and Shilla Burke. They were both alike, but very different. Dusk loved Dark-type Pokemon, while Shilla loved her cute Normal Pokemon. After growing old they passed it on to a couple named Draco and Liz Liebere. Afterwards, they had two twins named Mørk and Letta Liebere. Following the original footsteps of the original Gym Leaders, the two twins were like night and day, literally. Letta was a bright, cheery girl, while Mørk carried a shady demeanor. They currently reside as the Umbruhstar Gym Leaders, carrying powerful Dark-types and status-changing Normal-types.
While there is the Gym, there are also other major attractions, such as the PBF, the Pokemon Breeder Foundation. The PBF is a Breeding/Adoption Center, where trainers can adopt young and old, weak and strong, and fast and slow Pokemon, regardless of their age. However, the Pokemon Breeding Admins have to agree to give a trainer a new Pokemon from the Center. And the trainer has to have 50 Poke minimum for shots and vaccine tests.
The PBF is also a hotspot for Pokemon Breeders to show off their Pokemon, and it is also a Pokemon Contest location.
Another stop is the Pokemon Staravia Fan Club. The two flyboy brothers, Jack and John, are avid fans of the bird Pokemon. If you go in and show them a Staravia with a certain personality they are looking for, they will reward you with a random rare prize, some including evolution stones, Rare Candies, PP Ups, Master Balls etc. If you show them a shiny Staravia, it is said that they will give you a shiny Charmander egg, as well as twenty rare candies, but the legend varies from an egg + 500 rare candies, to 1 rare candy. The brothrs themselves refused to tell anyone but those who have shiny Staravia.
Finally, there is the mysterious Elite Team Base, where all Elite Four winners, regardless of what region, gather to trade, battle, chat and to have tournaments. The prizes are usually rare, and the Base leader is Camile, the sister of Lance. You will be blocked by two huge guys named Torrid and Bridger, who you can battle later on. They will deny you access if you have not beat the Elite Four in one or more regions. Lance the Champion has to beatable, but can be challenged on top of the Base. There is a hidden ladder to challenge him, so that you can challenge him, as well as not enter.
There are many small houses along the way, and overall, Umbruhstar City is not as dull and dark as it sounds.
Gym Leader Pokemon Stats:
Mork and Letta:
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Post by 1pokemon1 on Jul 2, 2007 22:13:35 GMT
*Claps*
Awesome
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Post by iAaron on Jul 3, 2007 13:28:43 GMT
Thanks Jin. ;D
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Post by 1pokemon1 on Jul 3, 2007 13:36:14 GMT
no they should thank you
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Post by Harry Dark on Jul 3, 2007 14:58:47 GMT
I have edited it a touch, just spelling and extras.
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Post by Harry Dark on Jul 3, 2007 15:11:37 GMT
 Reart TownTaken from ancient writings, which were scratched into the wall of the cave, the words 'Reart Town' were used as the towns name. The town is built entirely inside a massive natural cave, which floods regularly in spring to signify the melting of the Winter snows. The houses are built upwards to save space, which is a very interesting feature. The Town is mainly residential, with the only real attraction being the gym and contest hall. Reart Town Contests are often extremely exciting, as the contest takes place inside a small, dark cave, which is lit only for the contests. This can confuse Pokemon, meaning that only the best survive. It is also the location of the Yusoh Contest Championships once every three years. The gym in Reart Town, is led by Sarvan, a tough Electric + Flying type Gym Leader. Sarvan is a tough guy, who trains almost all day with his Pokemon, only getting stronger. Although his home Stadium is inside a cave, which would normally be a disadvantage to him, it is a credit to his strategy that he actually uses the natural surroundings to his advantage. Another thing to note about Reart Town is that it has no Pokemon Center. It uses the hot springs to the north as a healing point. |
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